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Born a beautiful smiling baby
Made everyone so proud
Nobody knew this baby
Would later have a crowd

Struggled through his life
Parents always mad
They split,he cried
Made him feel so sad

Growing up, this piscies didn't have a home
Moving house to house
Always feeling alone

But through it all he wasn't alone
He always had a friend
His guitar would never argue
It's loyalty would never bend

And soon this boy had talent
Nobody dared to doubt
That when that boy got singing
He sure could scream and shout

His works were bleached
His will was strong
He once smelt like teen spirit
Took the world with just one song

And once In Utero
He had nowhere to go
Sure he had his lovely wife
But the needle took control

With millions of adoring fans
Spread around the land
This punkrock Jesus
Died by his own hand

I'll miss you Kurt
Mabey I'll see you some day
But as you always said
It's Better To Burn Out Than To Fade Away
©2003-2010 ~HeroineAddikt
:iconheroineaddikt:

Author's Comments

A tribute poem that i'm writing about my idol..my jeezus...Kurt Donald Cobain
1967-1994

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:iconstupidgirl:
Wow! Omg! Soooooo adding this to my favs!!!!!!!!
I love you! And your work is amazing! :kiss:
:iconheroineaddikt:
thanks baby..i love you more
:iconwrecked:
you broke your structure in the third stanza. considering that you committed to it for the rest of the poem, that singular break sounds weird and throws off your rhythm.

otherwise, not a bad job, but you sell out your meaning for cheesy rhymes a few times.
:iconlurakai:
yeah, a few cheesy rhymes, but i probably do more than enough of that in MY work too... but good poem, i nearly got teary-eyed!
:iconchaoticdreams:
WOW definately goin in my favs
:iconheroineaddikt:
ya..im sorry..im not much of a poet
:iconheroineaddikt:
oh god..really...*tear* i just was listening to Nirvana...and i felt i should do something...so it i sadly had to sit here actuallly THINKING of things to say..it didnt come naturally..so ya..some of it was forced
:iconheroineaddikt:
aww...that you very much
:iconnjcoda:
reminds me much of my poem "music scarred by murder" [link]
I love him too, all the true fans love him. We also all despise courtney very much.
Not too many people know, though, that the line he wrote in his letter "it's better to burn out than fade away" that's actually just a twist on a Neil Young line by practically the same words.
Great work

R.I.P. Kurt


~NJcoda

--
Fell asleep and watched tv

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August 27, 2003
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